The Inmost Light (1892) is notable for a few reasons. First, it is the first appearance of Dyson, Machen’s “occult investigator”, man of science, historian of London’s underbelly, and all around fact-finder for some of the weird happenings that occur within Machen’s early weird tales. Second, it is arguably a slightly different version or retelling of Machen’s most famous tale, The Great God Pan (written in 1890), following a very similar plot from a different perspective, or at least with a slightly different outcome and point of focus.
Dyson, who puts the pieces of the mystery within the tale
together, doesn’t largely figure into the actual narrative, and calling him an
occult detective or anything similar (or, at least anything similar to the
likes of Quinn’s De Grandin or Hodgson’s Carnacki) would be a disservice to
readers looking for something within that genre. He frames the tale, like many of Machen’s
works told in an episodic, found clues fashion, but doesn’t have any lasting
impact on the proceedings beyond being incredibly lucky (or unlucky) at being
at the right place at the right time.
The tale itself, in brief, follows two old friends meeting
up and discussing a weird occurrence, which they between them manage to
unravel. This time around the focus is
on a doctor in a small London suburb who becomes embroiled in some mischief
when his wife disappears, and later is found dead. An examining doctor does an autopsy and
discovers the woman’s brain is something wholly unlike a human’s or an animal’s,
and tells Dyson later on that she seemed like some sort of devil and even her
corpse frightened him. Dyson, who
previously saw the woman’s monstrous face (though she’s also described as
beautiful) in a second story window, manages to piece things together through
luck and circumstance, eventually finding a small wooden box owned by the
doctor. Within the box are a brilliant
opal and a small book detailing what became of the wife. Like the doctor at the start of The Great God
Pan, there was some sort of occult influence on the doctor as he performed some
sort of vaguely defined procedure on his willing partner, somehow inviting an
outside force into her body and trapping her soul within the gem. Startled by this and the unholy light
emanating from the jewel he shatters the thing and the story ends.
Again, very similar to Pan in that a young woman is made a
willing vessel to something from beyond our understanding, eventually leading
to her corruption and the deaths of others, though in this case on a much
smaller scale and with far less reason given to the reader for the occult
practices. That said, the way in which
the woman’s possession is written and the seeming aftereffects of it are far
more impactful than they are in the more frankly depicted ones in Machen’s more
famous work.
Nobody wrote the corruption of the innocent (both in the
spiritual and physical sense) like Machen and, despite being less fleshed out, the
destruction of the young woman here really shines, not because of what we’re
told happens to her, but because of the coercion of the doctor and the sad
willingness of his wife to be utterly ruined by something no human can
understand. Her fear, sadness, guilt,
and shame is written so perfectly within a few short paragraphs (within the
found notes of the doctor) that it will stick with the reader even where the
more gaudy Pan doesn’t.
Why, we have to ask ourselves, do the victims in these
stories so willingly go along with the practices of predatory men? In this case, unlike in Pan, the victim seems
to be told entirely what will happen, and even goes so far as to ask the doctor
to kill her should the procedure succeed.
She allows the thing to happen, knowing it will kill her body and damn
her soul, but why?
Machen seems to suggest there is something sexual in the
ritual, and earlier within the tale a satyr is again mentioned (another theme
throughout Machen’s weird tales), while the woman’s “shame” is mentioned as
well – are we to suspect another rape via an otherworldly force? Is this the reason she welcomes the
corruption, and moreover why Machen goes out of his way to describe the woman
as beautiful earlier in the tale? The
reader is given just enough to ponder these questions while Dyson and the
reader are, unfortunately, left in the dark.
Pundits will surely point out that Machen’s tales seem to
focus on female sexuality or liberation (via penetration?) and give one the
point of view of a man afraid of a woman embracing her sexuality, and while
that certainly can be gleaned from the tale, I feel like it’s a short-sighted
take on things and ultimately robs the reader of what truly shines within
Machen’s tales.
Unlike Lovecraft’s (who was very obviously influenced by
this tale in both the use of the gem and the penetrative invasion by an outside
influence on humanity) external corruption, the smaller scale, internal
corruption here is perfectly done and really should be read and enjoyed by any
fan of weird fiction.
Note - Despite my take on the final pages of this tale, I
will say that ultimately The Great God Pan is the better story, but the
victim’s destruction in this story is better written. While they both tread similar ground, both
tales are more than worth reading on their own or as considered parts of a
whole.